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Post by Becca on Apr 17, 2006 20:41:21 GMT -5
Your Name: Gretta (Sabrina's sister. Her and my charactor are twins.) Your Age:13 Where did you hear about this board first?:Sister
Charactor's Name: Rebecca, but everyone calls her Becca. Gender:Female Age:13 Classification:Afareet Home:Katreh Powers: Becca's power is water. She can start small tital waves and floods. She can start small rain showers, too. She can start the rain shower as long as there are clouds in the sky, but in order to start the tital waves she needs a body of water neer her. The floods come from ground water that come from in the ground, obviously. Personality:Becca is quite timmid. She gets nervouse when anyone talkes to her. For that reason, she doesnt make friends easily. She can be loud at times, though. When her eaves drop, and she dislikes, or has a comment about what someone says, she speaks her mind without thinking. Physical Appearance:Becca has long wavy red hair much like her sister's. She looks almost exactly like her. She is a bit taller, though. Family:Becca has a mother, a father, a brother, and a twin sister(Natasha). Notes:She has a pretty good relationship with her sister.
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Rachel
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Post by Rachel on Apr 18, 2006 15:47:03 GMT -5
Um, eaves? Becca has eaves? I think I'd like to know a little more about her powers and personality. For example, does the water just come from nowhere, or does she need an existing body of water to work from? Just try to add a little more detail to this.
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Post by Becca on Apr 18, 2006 17:44:17 GMT -5
How's that? Eaves dropping just means she listens in to other people's conversation.
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Post by Omniscient on Apr 18, 2006 20:15:59 GMT -5
Hmm, I'm a little bit hesitant to allow twins at the moment.
Can you give us more information on her personality?
Tidal waves aren't doable, either, because there are no large bodies of water in Katreh.
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Post by Becca on Apr 19, 2006 7:17:16 GMT -5
It doesnt say she needs a large body of water. It just says she needs a body of water.
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Feng
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Post by Feng on Apr 20, 2006 12:40:49 GMT -5
Rachel was confused because you said 'eaves dropping'. The word is 'eavesdropping'. 'Eaves dropping' means actual eaves actually dropping. Quite different. But she'll need quite a lot of water to make any tidal wave worth spit. And besides, most of the bodies of water around the Fortress are piddly little streams. Trained water afareet can pull water out of the air and they use that, but it takes quite a bit of training and control that Becca won't have had yet. Omniscient, what's wrong with twins? As long as they don't have strange, Sueish telepathic powers, I really don't think there would be a problem.
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Post by Omniscient on Apr 20, 2006 14:29:08 GMT -5
Being stuck in rather the dark ages, twins would most likely have been killed off at birth. Could they be sisters instead? Irish twins?
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Feng
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Post by Feng on Apr 20, 2006 15:07:49 GMT -5
One would think that Katreh was more civilised. And it's a big place. They could come from some region where twins are viewed as interesting and strange, but not supernatural. I don't mean to be difficult, and if Gretta and Sabrina are fine with changing it, that's fine, but I don't really see the problem here. Still.
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Post by Becca on Apr 20, 2006 16:38:43 GMT -5
I understand, Omniscient, but, Feng has a point. Katreh is a big place, or they could be fron some other region.
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Post by Elizabeth on Apr 20, 2006 19:43:51 GMT -5
Feng does have a point. Mabye you could say, I dont know if this is possible in Katreh, that one of them died their hair so they looked different and wouldnt be killed? Then again, I could be wrong (Which I probably am.).
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Post by Omniscient on Apr 22, 2006 11:15:19 GMT -5
Looking back on your application, Becca, could you please write me a writing sample/scene for Becca. It doesn't have to be long, but I'd like to have a look at the way you write.
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Becca
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Post by Becca on Apr 22, 2006 11:46:46 GMT -5
Sure. About anything having to do with Katreh...I'll see what I write up for you.
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Post by Issy and Stella on Apr 29, 2006 12:54:43 GMT -5
I agree with Feng about the twins.
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Post by Becca on Apr 29, 2006 19:30:48 GMT -5
I personally think this makes Becca and Natasha's story more interesting. The story could be their life in hiding or something...
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Post by dragonfire on Apr 30, 2006 12:52:52 GMT -5
Well, I guess that would make the story a little more interesting...
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