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Post by Elizabeth on Apr 2, 2006 15:06:36 GMT -5
Your name:Abby Your age:11 Where did you hear about us:I also am a member of another message board, and someone on there recomended this.
Charactor's Name:Elizabeth Knowles Gender:Female Age:18 Classification:afareet Home:London. She's lived there all her life. Powers:Fire. She uses her powers way to much. She doesn't know when to and when not to use them. It's usually the oposite. She uses them when she shouldn't and when she should, she doesn't. She can make small fires, but she belives she can do anything. She doesn't relize her powers are fading. Personality:She is very vain. She doesn't care about anyone than herself. She belives the world is hers and doesn't think before she does something. She doesn't relize other people are on the same planet. She isn't the nicest person,, she hates almost every person escept for a few exseptions. She thinks she's the prettiest person in the universe, but really isn't. Physical Appearance:She as long wavy dark brown hair. (She is espesially vain about her hair.) Green/brown eyes. She isn't the tallest, but definately not short. Family:She has a sister that is 15, a mother and a father. She doesn' have a good relationship with anyone in her family. She doesn't care about them.
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Ruby
Afareet
In Training
Chaos
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Post by Ruby on Apr 2, 2006 15:52:25 GMT -5
Hey, nice! I like her personality. However, I think you need to describe her powers more.
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Post by Elizabeth on Apr 2, 2006 16:31:30 GMT -5
Ok, I'll do that. Ok, is that better, or do I need more? Also, on the other message board I go on, they're all NO DOUBLE POSTING! Is that not allowed here, either? Oh yeah, sorry my avatar's so hard to see, I had to set it as my backround to see it, then I went back to my previouse one. I made, though, so I like it...
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Leah
Afareet
In Training
Fire
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Post by Leah on Apr 2, 2006 16:57:18 GMT -5
Double posting is frowned upon, I believe. You really need to work on spelling, punctuation, capitalization, the works, and on lengthiness.
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Post by Elizabeth on Apr 2, 2006 16:59:55 GMT -5
Ok. I'll do that.
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Post by Omniscient on Apr 2, 2006 18:09:09 GMT -5
Abby:
-complete sentences, please -we need to know more about your character's powers, not just how she uses them, but what they do. -also, you should know that using magic in London is very dangerous.
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Post by Elizabeth on Apr 2, 2006 18:13:43 GMT -5
I know, but Elizabeth doesn't. She isn't that stupid, though, she doesn't use them in puplic.
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Post by Omniscient on Apr 2, 2006 18:16:17 GMT -5
Also, I'd like to know a bit more about her personality. 'Vain' doesn't really tell me all that much.
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Post by Elizabeth on Apr 2, 2006 18:17:52 GMT -5
Ok, I'll add that. Done.
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Post by Omniscient on Apr 2, 2006 18:46:51 GMT -5
If she's 18, her powers will already be beginning to fade, so it's quite unusual that she'll be able to make forest fires and burn people with her magic. Besides, most of the other afareet don't have flashy skills like being able to create forest fires, but instead can control small fires (making them hotter/colder or a bit larger/smaller) or heat metal quickly. Very few afareet can actually mess with the elements to the extent of creating forest fires.
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Feng
Afareet
Wind Afareet
Provisional Guildsman
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Post by Feng on Apr 2, 2006 18:51:23 GMT -5
I agree that we need more detail in almost everything, and that she seems a bit too powerful. However, once you get that all straightened out, I think that Elizabeth will be an excellent character.
Welcome!
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Post by Elizabeth on Apr 2, 2006 19:14:19 GMT -5
Ok, let me adjust that...ok, done
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Feng
Afareet
Wind Afareet
Provisional Guildsman
Posts: 65
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Post by Feng on Apr 2, 2006 19:23:14 GMT -5
Out of curiosity, which board did you see this one advertised on?
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Post by Elizabeth on Apr 2, 2006 19:27:22 GMT -5
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Feng
Afareet
Wind Afareet
Provisional Guildsman
Posts: 65
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Post by Feng on Apr 2, 2006 19:33:55 GMT -5
Ah, yeah, you would. I'm also on Term at Hogwarts, as Diana and Tamar. Who do you play?
This looks better. Now all you have to do is wait for admin approval before starting to play.
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