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Post by Rachel on Mar 23, 2006 20:14:45 GMT -5
Your Name:Attila the Bunny
Your Age:11
Where did you hear about this board first? My sister.
Character's Name: Rachel Jenkins
Gender: Girl
Age: 15
Classification: afareet
Home: Earth, Scotland. Currently living on the streets of London.
Powers: Water, especially good at rain (thunderstorms when she's mad, she likes rain, so gentle rain when she's particuarly happy) also good at all those dangerous things
water does (floods, tsunamis, hurricanes, typhoons). Almost no control.
Personality: Extremely rash, doesn't think about consequences at all, as a result quite brave. Not much of a thinker, if she comes up with something she thinks will work she'll just do it and not waste time thinking about if it's sensible. Optimistic and thinks she can do anything.
Physical Appearance: Dark, brown, curly, shoulder length hair that is practically impossible to tame. Blue-green-gray eyes and a fairly muscular build.
Family: Before she ran away to London (she was bored with rasing sheep) she lived with her parents, her 2 brothers, and her sister on a sheep farm in Scotland.
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Post by Rachel on Mar 23, 2006 20:23:26 GMT -5
That was me. Sorry, I wasn't logged in.
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Post by Ruby on Mar 23, 2006 20:37:07 GMT -5
'Ello, Bunny!
Jolly good charecter, lass, but you did nae put in the personality. Interesting powers...hehe.
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Post by Omniscient on Mar 23, 2006 21:06:50 GMT -5
Out of curiosity, whose sister are you? Someone from the Museblog?
First off, please write in complete sentences on applications.
Secondly, Katreh is a desert country, so there's not much water to work with and conjuring water is extremely difficult. If you can work with that, keep them the same, but I think you might have better luck with tweaking the powers slightly so that she's not so reliable on large bodies of water.
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Post by Feng on Mar 23, 2006 21:40:56 GMT -5
She's my sister. She says that that is a major problem with Rachel in Katreh: the lack of water. This will be good for teaching her control or something. (She would type this in herself, but I am hogging the computer.)
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Post by Issy and Stella on Mar 25, 2006 15:22:18 GMT -5
You know.... that sounds just like the character Archell on Muse Blog... interesting... oh vell...
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Post by Feng on Mar 25, 2006 15:30:02 GMT -5
Attila's not on the blog, though, so she doesn't know about Archell. But you're right, Rachel is, only with more of an element constraint. Is this a bad thing or good?
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Post by Issy and Stella on Mar 26, 2006 9:52:29 GMT -5
hmmm... well i think it's actually a good thing because if Rachel was exactly like Archell then who knows what would happen!!! because Archell is the one with control over all the weather... by the way do you think that i could get another character if i create another account? I was think of bringing in Salimila...
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Feng
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Post by Feng on Mar 26, 2006 23:43:12 GMT -5
Rachel is even a sort of anagram of Archell... That's seriously weird. She just picked the name Rachel because she liked it. What's Archell's last name?
You already have two characters, but I guess putting Salimila in would be fine. However, that's just my completely unprofessional opinion. PM Omniscient if you really want to know.
Attila wants to know if she has to make any modifications to the profile, or if she's good to go.
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Post by Ehmer on Mar 28, 2006 21:57:49 GMT -5
(From Omniscient) Atilla should rewrite the parts that aren't in complete sentences.
Aside from that, it's fine. We'll need to have a more serious discussion about her powers once she starts playing, though.
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Post by Rachel on Mar 29, 2006 16:27:59 GMT -5
Your Name:Attila the Bunny
Your Age:11
Where did you hear about this board first? My sister.
Character's Name: Rachel Jenkins
Gender: Girl
Age: 15
Classification: afareet
Home: Rachel lived in Scotland before she ran away. Currently, she is living on the streets of London.
Powers: Rachel is a water afareet with almost no control. She has an aptitude for rain ( thunderstorms when she's mad, a lighter, happier, rain when she's happy), tsunamis, hurricanes, floods, typhoons, and any other seemingly rash and dangerous things water does.
Personality: Rachel is extremely rash, and not much of a thinker. She doesn't consider the consequences at all, and as a result she's very brave. If she thinks of an idea that's even slightly sane (well, maybe it doesn't even have to be sane) she'll go for it. She's optimistic and thinks she can do anything.
Physical Appearance: She has dark, brown, curly, shoulder length hair that is practically impossible to tame and blue-green-gray eyes. She has a fairly muscular build because of all her work on the sheep farm.
Family: Before she ran away to London (she was bored with rasing sheep) she lived with her parents, her 2 brothers, and her sister on a sheep farm in Scotland.
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Ruby
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Post by Ruby on Mar 29, 2006 17:12:47 GMT -5
I certainly think it's good! Can she create water just randomly, or does she need a focus (making it rain from a thunderhead), or can she only manipulate existing water (alter the course of a tsunami)?
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Post by Adela on Mar 29, 2006 22:02:22 GMT -5
Attila says Rachel needs water to work her magic, but it doesn't have to be in any specific form. When she trains up a little more, she should even be able to use water in the air. Now, however, she can only use water in its liquid form. For example, she can take water out of a river and turn it into rain.
At least, that's what I think she said.
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Ruby
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Post by Ruby on Mar 30, 2006 6:39:43 GMT -5
Cool.
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Post by Omniscient on Mar 30, 2006 20:48:49 GMT -5
Good. APPROVED.
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